Thursday, December 14, 2006

make your own statement


My targeted audience is younger childrren of our age. I chose to target this audience so the kids would make the wrong decision hanging out on the streets. I chose to use this as a message towards the children to help them choose the right path early so they won' t mess up, but only create nothing but a go path ahead of them. I chose this message to let them know that their are consequences to the decisions that they make. Also I would like to let the kids know that it's a hard world out there and if they make the wring choices they can end up in places that they don't want to be.

I would want my audience to stay off the street and find something productive to do. I chose this picture because i want my audience to know the consequences of their actions if they were to mess up and do something that they will regret. What I want my audience to do is stay out of jail and stay in school to do better later on in life. This picture basically tells my audience that I want them to stay out of the court house and being sentence years in prison. Also I want my audience to not be a victim of the court by making the wrong choices when you wasn't supposed too.

I think this is an important topic because to many kids now a days are going to jail for making the wrong choices. Also teens who commit crimes are being charged as adults. I think this is very important subject because the state is also spending to much money on jail houses and not enough on school supply. I believe that my subject is important because kids need to be set on the right path to success instead of resulting to violence. I think that it is important to keep kids out of jail because they are our future and need to lead sucess full lives instead of hurting and stealing from others.

I think that I am sucessful in getting my point across because it shows the consequences of the wrongs choices. It helps the kids realize what would happen to them if they were to go down the wrong path. I am sucessful in getting my point across because it shows people how young kids can be convicted of a crime. I think that i am sucessful in getting my point because it helps people choose the path to take. I think that I got my point across because it shows people how young kids are starting to get locked up in jail.

www.tsenet.com/.../103103%20jail%20birds%204.jpg
www.osba-ohio.org/Plaques/gavel%201.jpg